My eyes
your eyes
everybody's eyes
god I like this start so much better
this is my first attempt at a dark sexy book, because I think it is time for one of those, and by dark sexy I mean Claudia Black-ish.
so it's official, WHO WANTS TO READ CHAPTERSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS BECAUSE I'M READY TO SPIT OUT BULLSHITTTTTTTTTTTT I'M FEELING THE GROOVEEEEEEEEE
It's official new title is 'Fear Me Not', which is also better but not quite what I'm looking for, but it'll do for now. I'm trying to willfully craft this writing style, combining the brevity and gritty feel I did in Heartstoppers with the lore and worldbuilding of The World That Does Not Bow. We'll see how it goes~
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